The overall plot of the game is doing fine, but the script seems completely broken, The evening is sometimes skipped with no explanation, when the assistant teacher is introduced her dialog has Lena's name. When the first nudist experience is suggested and Allana offered to participate, the MC acts like he never seem her, but i met her at the art club before. Also there's Luna and Clarissa that one day appeared out of nowhere acting like we have some relation with them , but i never met any of those girls, maybe is out of order.
This is not a complaining, just a feedback of what i noticed.
Edit: just noticed, I don't think i have seen any Weekend
Easily the cutest exhibitionist game I've ever played. I fell in LOVE with Olivia and Bailey, and all the girls really! Still trying to unlock some wallpapers, but looking forward to the next update! :)
so, after going to the night class twice and helping Bailey once I was made to go see someone named Luna "again", except she'd never shown up during any other part of the game. MC and her are acting like friends but I've never seen her before. rather confusing.
So this Game is still not finished or not Final just yet, i see. Just some feedbacks, first, give this game 2 or multiple endings for picking Lena or Olivia or maybe Allana. Second, since Allana is a free for use Friend for MC when he got a boner, just give Allana more access (not ingame story) for more Fan Service...
hey great concept! no hate at all, just some constructive feedback. some of the character models could definitely use some work, some of the dialog is a bit... cringy to say the least. and the Nya girl is leaned in a bit too hard lol. i love the game tho, just needs a few tweaks :)
Hey,I recently downloaded this game and i'm addicted i'm loving it.But there's a problem which is not letting me continue the game.When the MC confesses his feelings to lena after that date and the scene ends i am just being sent to the main menu.No matter how many times I replay this scene it always sends me to the main menu.Please help me cuz I really want to play this game
Hi, I discovered your game some time ago, and i really like it. I would support it more if I could, but saddly i can't for now or the reasonable future.
Still, I keep checking it every now and then, and while i enjoy how the story is growing, I have a little feedback I'd like to give.
SPOILER for those who haven't played yet.
On most of the early parts you have a choice to refuse almost any sexy “scene”; you can refuse “help” at the beach or the garden, you can pretend to not hear Clarissa, skip subplots with other girls, and so on. It's something that increase replay value: play the game pursuing different girls, have a couple at the same time, or go full harem. I like that.
"Sexy situations" are more than fine. Entering on Olivia chaging is fine. Using your energy to focus on boobs is hilarius. Gettin an erection in the night class is reasonable. Alanna and the creation of the night class is a little forced, but still fine as it open a big subplot.
Yet i noticed at least two big situations where the agency of the player is completely removed.
Like with Valerie on the beach, there has been a lot of monogamous gameplay where I wish i could have skipped it (especially with Grace, she creeps me out). Most of the times, I actually use the skip button for this scene.
Same thing with the after-yoga scene. I'm quite happy there is an alternative now in the study group, but still. If i'm pursuing a solo Olivia game it feels really bad.
Anyway, thanks for your work, I'll keep following.
you should put some kind of hint on how to get the pictures in the gallery, some of us are missing a few (i actually went started a new game like 5 times and still missing multiple lol)
i haven't played the game in a while and was on v0.10 when i caught up. i downloaded v0.16 and it is a new install. is there any way to progress to where i was on v0.10 and start from there on the new version of the game?
Hey, just downloaded the game and got a few steps in. Some constructive criticism, please use contractions in dialogue. I am - I'm, can not - can't, you are - you're, how is - how's etc. Spoken English sounds robotic and stilted without them, and I have seen more than a few times they could have been utilised.
For the "Narrator", please, don't. Unless you intend to characterise the narrator, use inner monologue and in story beats to do exposition. Narration in a written medium is entirely useless (again, unless the narrator is a character themselves.)
A hint for Renpy in particular, please use different colours for the names of different characters, it makes distinguishing who is talking at a glance much easier, especially when the framing isn't obvious.
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Hey!Remember to check the emal.=)
兄弟们，菜做好了，欢迎品尝。咸淡或者其他改进建议及bug反馈，欢迎留言。下个版本见QAQ我先去睡了
when’s the next update
Thank you for your interest! Probrably in a few weeks! =)
when are you going to add V 18 for public on here?
Thank you for your interest! Probrably in a few weeks! =)
Hi there, thank you for playing and liking this game!
I would love a chinese translation. Can you please send me your email or how can I contact you? =)
Is there a guide to reveal all gallery? Looking forward to next update
Maybe i'll make one in future. but currently 3 images are not unlockable due to bug. I'll fix it in future too.
The overall plot of the game is doing fine, but the script seems completely broken, The evening is sometimes skipped with no explanation, when the assistant teacher is introduced her dialog has Lena's name. When the first nudist experience is suggested and Allana offered to participate, the MC acts like he never seem her, but i met her at the art club before. Also there's Luna and Clarissa that one day appeared out of nowhere acting like we have some relation with them , but i never met any of those girls, maybe is out of order.
This is not a complaining, just a feedback of what i noticed.
Edit: just noticed, I don't think i have seen any Weekend
I din realize about the allana part and some of the bugs! Thank you for telling! =)
Okey... me gusta lo que veo.... me lo voy a probar.
I am wondering if we will get more story with both Allana and Glory been sometime since we had any sceans with those two in the game.
Easily the cutest exhibitionist game I've ever played. I fell in LOVE with Olivia and Bailey, and all the girls really! Still trying to unlock some wallpapers, but looking forward to the next update! :)
下载到48.5mb以后无法再下载是什么原因
so, after going to the night class twice and helping Bailey once I was made to go see someone named Luna "again", except she'd never shown up during any other part of the game. MC and her are acting like friends but I've never seen her before. rather confusing.
Did you meet her in the beginning of the game in the library ?
I don't think so. I remember having an option to look around the library after Olivia's tour but I just left instead.
what changed in 0.17? i'm only seeing one more scene with bailey
really enjoying this game, allana is really visually appealing, would love to see more scenes with her and more story too!
Hey love the game so far just wondering if you could add a futa character if you could consider also love the new .17 update bailey looks fine
So this Game is still not finished or not Final just yet, i see. Just some feedbacks, first, give this game 2 or multiple endings for picking Lena or Olivia or maybe Allana. Second, since Allana is a free for use Friend for MC when he got a boner, just give Allana more access (not ingame story) for more Fan Service...
hey great concept! no hate at all, just some constructive feedback. some of the character models could definitely use some work, some of the dialog is a bit... cringy to say the least. and the Nya girl is leaned in a bit too hard lol. i love the game tho, just needs a few tweaks :)
also why is my homeboy wearing a latex shirt? give him some cotton!
Ok so...,...your game is a flipping great how to guide for beginners but.... it's far too much of a slow burn!!!
Hey,I recently downloaded this game and i'm addicted i'm loving it.But there's a problem which is not letting me continue the game.When the MC confesses his feelings to lena after that date and the scene ends i am just being sent to the main menu.No matter how many times I replay this scene it always sends me to the main menu.Please help me cuz I really want to play this game
Hi, try picking choices that favour Lena instead of Olivia and you will get the scene =)
I did make a mistake at that place too, it should not be the end of the game, I'll fix that bug. So sorry about that.
um wheres the uncompressed version of 0.16 for p
amazing game, love it so far, keep up the good work!
Hi, I discovered your game some time ago, and i really like it. I would support it more if I could, but saddly i can't for now or the reasonable future.
Still, I keep checking it every now and then, and while i enjoy how the story is growing, I have a little feedback I'd like to give.
SPOILER for those who haven't played yet.
On most of the early parts you have a choice to refuse almost any sexy “scene”; you can refuse “help” at the beach or the garden, you can pretend to not hear Clarissa, skip subplots with other girls, and so on. It's something that increase replay value: play the game pursuing different girls, have a couple at the same time, or go full harem. I like that.
"Sexy situations" are more than fine. Entering on Olivia chaging is fine. Using your energy to focus on boobs is hilarius. Gettin an erection in the night class is reasonable. Alanna and the creation of the night class is a little forced, but still fine as it open a big subplot.
Yet i noticed at least two big situations where the agency of the player is completely removed.
Like with Valerie on the beach, there has been a lot of monogamous gameplay where I wish i could have skipped it (especially with Grace, she creeps me out). Most of the times, I actually use the skip button for this scene.
Same thing with the after-yoga scene. I'm quite happy there is an alternative now in the study group, but still. If i'm pursuing a solo Olivia game it feels really bad.
Anyway, thanks for your work, I'll keep following.
Oh I see. Thank you so much for loving this game and taking the time to write the feedback. I'll put an option for it in the future =)
where is the uncompressed version of 0.16 for pc?
you should put some kind of hint on how to get the pictures in the gallery, some of us are missing a few (i actually went started a new game like 5 times and still missing multiple lol)
just got to Lyra's scene with her old school friends, holy shit, i love that scene lol
Will there be impreg?
what fetishes are in the game and what are planned?
i haven't played the game in a while and was on v0.10 when i caught up. i downloaded v0.16 and it is a new install. is there any way to progress to where i was on v0.10 and start from there on the new version of the game?
New install ? All your save files are gone ?
I play on android and when downloading the v0.16 version of the game, it just makes a new install instead of updating the game.
+1 for different bust sizes and pubic styles
Hello, i just wanted to say if you can fix Mike's shirt it seems his shirt is way more shiny and reflective lol.
And also please add more dialogues after Mike confessed to Olivia.
EDIT: im obsessed in Olivia though but i can't feel her :(...
see my video
bro my scene is different,its does'nt have olivia and it keeps sending me back to main menu after this scene what should i do?
When will it be availabble for ios or can i just use android/windows download anyway?
also when is the oliva game public?
I'm not a fan of those two decision buttons with one big "FOR PATREON" locks. That also makes it look like it will stay locked.
there is no patreon lock in this game.
Just click that button, you will get it
I'm thinking on making sum fanarts but I should first play the new versions, I haven't played this since like 2023
Will this game be on steam.
in future!
I'm in!!!
When is V15 coming out for the public on here
Hey, just downloaded the game and got a few steps in. Some constructive criticism, please use contractions in dialogue. I am - I'm, can not - can't, you are - you're, how is - how's etc. Spoken English sounds robotic and stilted without them, and I have seen more than a few times they could have been utilised.
For the "Narrator", please, don't. Unless you intend to characterise the narrator, use inner monologue and in story beats to do exposition. Narration in a written medium is entirely useless (again, unless the narrator is a character themselves.)
A hint for Renpy in particular, please use different colours for the names of different characters, it makes distinguishing who is talking at a glance much easier, especially when the framing isn't obvious.
Also, please stop using boobies.
I was about to say the same thing. Especially for the first part, it would take some time, but surely it would make a great change.
How long will it take to translate into Chinese