So this Game is still not finished or not Final just yet, i see. Just some feedbacks, first, give this game 2 or multiple endings for picking Lena or Olivia or maybe Allana. Second, since Allana is a free for use Friend for MC when he got a boner, just give Allana more access (not ingame story) for more Fan Service...
hey great concept! no hate at all, just some constructive feedback. some of the character models could definitely use some work, some of the dialog is a bit... cringy to say the least. and the Nya girl is leaned in a bit too hard lol. i love the game tho, just needs a few tweaks :)
Hey,I recently downloaded this game and i'm addicted i'm loving it.But there's a problem which is not letting me continue the game.When the MC confesses his feelings to lena after that date and the scene ends i am just being sent to the main menu.No matter how many times I replay this scene it always sends me to the main menu.Please help me cuz I really want to play this game
Hi, I discovered your game some time ago, and i really like it. I would support it more if I could, but saddly i can't for now or the reasonable future.
Still, I keep checking it every now and then, and while i enjoy how the story is growing, I have a little feedback I'd like to give.
SPOILER for those who haven't played yet.
On most of the early parts you have a choice to refuse almost any sexy “scene”; you can refuse “help” at the beach or the garden, you can pretend to not hear Clarissa, skip subplots with other girls, and so on. It's something that increase replay value: play the game pursuing different girls, have a couple at the same time, or go full harem. I like that.
"Sexy situations" are more than fine. Entering on Olivia chaging is fine. Using your energy to focus on boobs is hilarius. Gettin an erection in the night class is reasonable. Alanna and the creation of the night class is a little forced, but still fine as it open a big subplot.
Yet i noticed at least two big situations where the agency of the player is completely removed.
Like with Valerie on the beach, there has been a lot of monogamous gameplay where I wish i could have skipped it (especially with Grace, she creeps me out). Most of the times, I actually use the skip button for this scene.
Same thing with the after-yoga scene. I'm quite happy there is an alternative now in the study group, but still. If i'm pursuing a solo Olivia game it feels really bad.
Anyway, thanks for your work, I'll keep following.
you should put some kind of hint on how to get the pictures in the gallery, some of us are missing a few (i actually went started a new game like 5 times and still missing multiple lol)
i haven't played the game in a while and was on v0.10 when i caught up. i downloaded v0.16 and it is a new install. is there any way to progress to where i was on v0.10 and start from there on the new version of the game?
Hey, just downloaded the game and got a few steps in. Some constructive criticism, please use contractions in dialogue. I am - I'm, can not - can't, you are - you're, how is - how's etc. Spoken English sounds robotic and stilted without them, and I have seen more than a few times they could have been utilised.
For the "Narrator", please, don't. Unless you intend to characterise the narrator, use inner monologue and in story beats to do exposition. Narration in a written medium is entirely useless (again, unless the narrator is a character themselves.)
A hint for Renpy in particular, please use different colours for the names of different characters, it makes distinguishing who is talking at a glance much easier, especially when the framing isn't obvious.
Excuse me, I noticed that your work does not contain Chinese subtitles, and your work has attracted many Chinese users, and I am one of them. Unfortunately, language blocks us from experiencing your work. Do you have any intention? What about adding Chinese subtitles to the work? I believe this will add more fans to your work. Of course, considering that the producer, that is, your energy may not be able to complete the translation work, I would like to make a suggestion. I can help you complete the text translation work for free, and then you can add the text When it comes to your work, do you accept this suggestion? Looking forward to your reply
Hi, i like how you can change your name in the beginning of the game , but what if you can have more than that. For example I think it’ll be cool if you can customize facial features, hair color, skin color etc.
Other than that this is a incredible game definitely one of the best i’ve played keep up the good work!
For every feature change, you increase the number of renders required by that number...
So let's say 5 skin colours, 5 hair colours and 3 types of facial hair (+1 for none) would make it 5x5x4=100 times the renders. Depending on the GFX card and complexity, that is 600-3000 minutes PER SCENE (10-50 hours!!!!) (And that is ignoring the file size!!!)
The name in the dialogue is misleading or not properly arranged it will become random talker, you should fix that. The story go deeper and more of them showing their personal problem.... That Diana from Bar scene feels like she set up Mike to see his teacher s problem and help her solve it. I like it but it strange that the other guy who with Mike before in the club is sudden missing in the updated story.... Keep up the good work.
Hi guys! Currently I have no way to upload the new update here because the game file is above 1gb and Itch.io only allow files below 1gb to be uploaded. So, please download it from here instead.
Hi guys! Currently I have no way to upload the new update here because the game file is above 1gb and Itch.io only allow files below 1gb to be uploaded. So, please download it from here instead.
Would you be interested in proofreading services for your games? I am interested in joining the community and would be interested in helping out with things like verb tenses and conjugations that could help the game flow more smoothly for native or fluent English speakers. I'm loving the game by the way.
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So this Game is still not finished or not Final just yet, i see. Just some feedbacks, first, give this game 2 or multiple endings for picking Lena or Olivia or maybe Allana. Second, since Allana is a free for use Friend for MC when he got a boner, just give Allana more access (not ingame story) for more Fan Service...
hey great concept! no hate at all, just some constructive feedback. some of the character models could definitely use some work, some of the dialog is a bit... cringy to say the least. and the Nya girl is leaned in a bit too hard lol. i love the game tho, just needs a few tweaks :)
also why is my homeboy wearing a latex shirt? give him some cotton!
Ok so...,...your game is a flipping great how to guide for beginners but.... it's far too much of a slow burn!!!
Hey,I recently downloaded this game and i'm addicted i'm loving it.But there's a problem which is not letting me continue the game.When the MC confesses his feelings to lena after that date and the scene ends i am just being sent to the main menu.No matter how many times I replay this scene it always sends me to the main menu.Please help me cuz I really want to play this game
Hi, try picking choices that favour Lena instead of Olivia and you will get the scene =)
I did make a mistake at that place too, it should not be the end of the game, I'll fix that bug. So sorry about that.
um wheres the uncompressed version of 0.16 for p
amazing game, love it so far, keep up the good work!
Hi, I discovered your game some time ago, and i really like it. I would support it more if I could, but saddly i can't for now or the reasonable future.
Still, I keep checking it every now and then, and while i enjoy how the story is growing, I have a little feedback I'd like to give.
SPOILER for those who haven't played yet.
On most of the early parts you have a choice to refuse almost any sexy “scene”; you can refuse “help” at the beach or the garden, you can pretend to not hear Clarissa, skip subplots with other girls, and so on. It's something that increase replay value: play the game pursuing different girls, have a couple at the same time, or go full harem. I like that.
"Sexy situations" are more than fine. Entering on Olivia chaging is fine. Using your energy to focus on boobs is hilarius. Gettin an erection in the night class is reasonable. Alanna and the creation of the night class is a little forced, but still fine as it open a big subplot.
Yet i noticed at least two big situations where the agency of the player is completely removed.
Like with Valerie on the beach, there has been a lot of monogamous gameplay where I wish i could have skipped it (especially with Grace, she creeps me out). Most of the times, I actually use the skip button for this scene.
Same thing with the after-yoga scene. I'm quite happy there is an alternative now in the study group, but still. If i'm pursuing a solo Olivia game it feels really bad.
Anyway, thanks for your work, I'll keep following.
Oh I see. Thank you so much for loving this game and taking the time to write the feedback. I'll put an option for it in the future =)
where is the uncompressed version of 0.16 for pc?
you should put some kind of hint on how to get the pictures in the gallery, some of us are missing a few (i actually went started a new game like 5 times and still missing multiple lol)
just got to Lyra's scene with her old school friends, holy shit, i love that scene lol
Will there be impreg?
what fetishes are in the game and what are planned?
i haven't played the game in a while and was on v0.10 when i caught up. i downloaded v0.16 and it is a new install. is there any way to progress to where i was on v0.10 and start from there on the new version of the game?
New install ? All your save files are gone ?
I play on android and when downloading the v0.16 version of the game, it just makes a new install instead of updating the game.
+1 for different bust sizes and pubic styles
Hello, i just wanted to say if you can fix Mike's shirt it seems his shirt is way more shiny and reflective lol.
And also please add more dialogues after Mike confessed to Olivia.
EDIT: im obsessed in Olivia though but i can't feel her :(...
see my video
bro my scene is different,its does'nt have olivia and it keeps sending me back to main menu after this scene what should i do?
When will it be availabble for ios or can i just use android/windows download anyway?
also when is the oliva game public?
I'm not a fan of those two decision buttons with one big "FOR PATREON" locks. That also makes it look like it will stay locked.
there is no patreon lock in this game.
Just click that button, you will get it
I'm thinking on making sum fanarts but I should first play the new versions, I haven't played this since like 2023
Will this game be on steam.
in future!
I'm in!!!
When is V15 coming out for the public on here
Hey, just downloaded the game and got a few steps in. Some constructive criticism, please use contractions in dialogue. I am - I'm, can not - can't, you are - you're, how is - how's etc. Spoken English sounds robotic and stilted without them, and I have seen more than a few times they could have been utilised.
For the "Narrator", please, don't. Unless you intend to characterise the narrator, use inner monologue and in story beats to do exposition. Narration in a written medium is entirely useless (again, unless the narrator is a character themselves.)
A hint for Renpy in particular, please use different colours for the names of different characters, it makes distinguishing who is talking at a glance much easier, especially when the framing isn't obvious.
Also, please stop using boobies.
I was about to say the same thing. Especially for the first part, it would take some time, but surely it would make a great change.
How long will it take to translate into Chinese
I was unable to find images 2, 26, and 39.
Me too
Why is there no new updates for Android
Amazing game!!!!! any idea when the next update will be??
thank you ! 😁 Lucky you. Next update is today!!
Yay!!! Thank you i really enjoy your game keep up the great work!!!!!
Excuse me, I noticed that your work does not contain Chinese subtitles, and your work has attracted many Chinese users, and I am one of them. Unfortunately, language blocks us from experiencing your work. Do you have any intention? What about adding Chinese subtitles to the work? I believe this will add more fans to your work. Of course, considering that the producer, that is, your energy may not be able to complete the translation work, I would like to make a suggestion. I can help you complete the text translation work for free, and then you can add the text When it comes to your work, do you accept this suggestion? Looking forward to your reply
Would love to!
Can you join my discord ?
https://discord.com/invite/ue9xFGPQ
有中文翻译嘛
In the future =)
可惜
It would be better if the characters can be dubbed like Japanese galgame. I can also practice my English.
Hi, i like how you can change your name in the beginning of the game , but what if you can have more than that. For example I think it’ll be cool if you can customize facial features, hair color, skin color etc.
Other than that this is a incredible game definitely one of the best i’ve played keep up the good work!
That's nearly impossible for a renpy game since all the images are pre-rendered.
For every feature change, you increase the number of renders required by that number...
So let's say 5 skin colours, 5 hair colours and 3 types of facial hair (+1 for none) would make it 5x5x4=100 times the renders. Depending on the GFX card and complexity, that is 600-3000 minutes PER SCENE (10-50 hours!!!!)
(And that is ignoring the file size!!!)
in a few days ! I need to port it to android first
masterpiece
thank you!
compressed? what did it mean again? less animation or quality? It's the highest version number however.
I also don't think it actually downloads.
compressed makes the file size smaller, with slight graphical differences. recomended for low end laptops and desktops
The name in the dialogue is misleading or not properly arranged it will become random talker, you should fix that. The story go deeper and more of them showing their personal problem.... That Diana from Bar scene feels like she set up Mike to see his teacher s problem and help her solve it. I like it but it strange that the other guy who with Mike before in the club is sudden missing in the updated story.... Keep up the good work.
Hi guys! Currently I have no way to upload the new update here because the game file is above 1gb and Itch.io only allow files below 1gb to be uploaded.
So, please download it from here instead.
Please don't forget about us Elsa. We love to have a update soon. I really enjoy this story and hope there's more to come.
Hi guys! Currently I have no way to upload the new update here because the game file is above 1gb and Itch.io only allow files below 1gb to be uploaded.
So, please download it from here instead.
嘿，您好，请问可以发布到steam平台上面吗，还有，什么时候可以推出中文？谢谢
Yes. But I need to remove all the remove all the uniforms of the girls because steam banned highschool games. I am currently working on that =)
Would you be interested in proofreading services for your games? I am interested in joining the community and would be interested in helping out with things like verb tenses and conjugations that could help the game flow more smoothly for native or fluent English speakers. I'm loving the game by the way.